Thank goodness the Finale!
And since it looks like you've gotten little to no feed back on almost EVERYTHING you've made up to this point I'll give some:
Your work seems to be style over substance. The only reason I'm here commenting on this video right now is because of the art portal submission: BLOOD SPIRAL Finale 1-2
which showed a great 3d shader character animation. HOWEVER I DON'T UNDERSTAND WHAT IS GOING ON
"Bro what's going with his hair?" says the shapeless silhouette to the other shapeless silhouette. I guess we'll assume that Tune is diffrent from everyone else, but the only evidence we have is what we're being TOLD not SHOWN
The backwards text to speech voices are slightly grating but stylistically they work, the anime dialogue is rudimentary and more of that "Tell don't show" school of writing. Gorgon Brains seem cool, but uhhh what are they for? You know what, for that matter what is a Gorgon? Where are we? Chroman particles? What was that lightning cummin outta yah!? Bro Neptune is packing an extra long schlong and for what? Casey looks cool, but it still doesn't explain who that furry fox character from earlier is because nothing is explained. Why would one assume that Millennium Labs won't save them? "Don't trust Mill Labs" Water rations are running short? Who gives those rations? Millennium Labs? Do they control the water supply? What did Tune do to the well? Some electric shows up and then I assume Gorgon's arrive to defend the water supply? AIEEEE I'M YIIKING OUT BRO
The style overhaul will probably bring more attention to your work so good work on that. But the writing is confusing, the sexual overtones will deter causal viewers, and the choppy animation while stylistic and slightly entertaining doesn't read entirely well at parts. (The part where Neptune pushes down the two shapeless silhouettes to save them from the Gorgons we don't see what Neptune is saving them from so it reads as Tune just piledriving them into the ground)
Hopefully the future episodes of this "Finale" Fantasy you're making will explain more of what's happening here and judging by the teaser image of 1-2 we'll see more of what CASEY'S PACKING BOING YOING YOING and the animation you're doing is a big improvement, but so far as what this is you need to write more to an audience who can't see into your head. You clearly got a lot of what's happening here in there, but making it understandable will be the first step towards helping people want to see more.